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Post by leorahayward on Sept 19, 2009 0:05:57 GMT -5
Welcome to my Murder Mystery what is this you’re asking? Its a little fanfic I made for a HORRIFIC general hospital Murder (Which is my fav soap) and you guys are going to pitch in with the story ive already picked the murdered but you guys pick THE MURDERER your comments on each part will determine who killed the murdered now after a spin of the wheel a murdered was chosen
here were the canadates
Sonny Corinthos Jason Morgan Elizabeth Webber Luke Spencer Lucky Spencer Anthony Zacchara Claudia Zacchara Garrett Floyd
and the unlucky fellow is........
Claudia Zacchara
Cause I hate her now lets start ----------------------- JasonEmilyFan Murder Mystery Part 1 - Finding Out ----------------------- Spinelli Was walking in the park on a hot summer day when he saw a darkish object in the bushes he walked over To check it out and it was the cold dead corpse Of One Claudia Zacchara it would be the second Corpse Spinelii Discovered following Georgie Jones he immanently called 911 and performed CPR on Claudia but at last it was to Late Claudia had gone to the angels (or the devils) and was no more on our green earth when the Police arrived They weren’t shocked to Claudia dead but some weird marks on her body which looked like a video game controller on her stomach caused every to maybe believe it wasn’t a mob hit and was COLD BLODDED MURDER or accidental murder
Johnny Zacchara WHY WHY Claudia im sorry I couldn’t protect you i am really and wherever you are i am sorry Claudia
Then just then Claudia’s ghost appears
Claudia Zacchara don’t worry johnny i will be fine but cause some dirty bastred killed me but i want you to find out who and avenge me johnny AND STOP SLEEPING WITH THAT TRAMP FROM BENSONHURST see ya when you die i am with my baby now so i am fine bye johnny i love you
Johnny Zacchara CLAUDIA CLAUDIA CLAUDIA why why why why
Carly Jacks OH MY GOD Claudia?
Mac Scorpio This doesn’t look like and old mob hit no this might have been some one here in Port Charles
Michael Corinthos Claudia! what happened mom?
Carly Jacks Shes dead Michael
Kate Howard ahh that tramp is dead
Johnny Zacchara SHUT UP ABOUT MY SISTER YOU DEVIL
'Johnny shoots Kate in the kidney by mistake causing Kate to start Liver and have cardiac arrest on the spot But Johnny Performs CPR to keep her heart beating as he goes with Kate to General Hospital’
Carly Jacks So Claudia’s dead and Kate needs a new liver? Wow funky day
We head to the prison where Anthony gets the word his daughter is dead
Anthony Zacchara Claudia’s dead? Not what I expected to her on this day which happens to be her birthday but hey I don’t have to give her a present anymore
Morgan Corinthos today’s Claudia’s birthday or should I say her death date I was going to give her this Yankee jersey but now i cant i guess i will give it to dad or Johnny
Carly Jacks I just talked to her last night and she was fine what happened between then and now
Mac Scorpio I don’t know guys I just don’t know
END PART 1
Coming Up on Part 2
What will happen to Kate?
Will Sonny find out about the murder and how will he react?
Who Killed Claudia? Sonny? A Mob Hit? Jerry Jacks? Someone we don’t know about?
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Post by leorahayward on Sept 19, 2009 0:06:51 GMT -5
--Part 2 - More Murder --
After finding Claudia’s cold dead body We arrive back at the Park where Mac and the team are investigating, Claudia’s Murder it was shocking, and not shocking as Claudia was a mobster but shocking as why would any one want to kill her? Well anyway Mac and the gang surprisingly don’t find any gun shot wounds or stab wounds from first look and there confused Any gun shot wounds or stab wounds would indicate a mob hit but surprisingly there were no wounds from a knife or gun So this might mean that it was not a mob hit but a murder then just then we hear a gunshot
Mac Scorpio COME ON LETS GO
Carly Jacks ok ok ok ok
'The gunshot came from Carlys Beach house Carly was hoping that it wasn’t the worse as Morgan had gone home After arriving at the park they rush quickly to Carlys beach house And when they arrive they find the worse Morgan HAD BEEN MURDERED'
Mac Scorpio Oh shoot
Carly Jacks NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MY BABY Morgan speak to me SPEAK TO ME SPEAK TO ME NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Morgan I will save you
Mac Scorpio Stop it carly it’s to late STOP IT he’s dead im sorry we cant do anything if we had gotten here earlier we might have Saved him but traffic killed him and the dirty bastard who shot him
Sonny Corinthos hey carl... MORGAN MORGAN MORGAN
Jason Morgan what’s goin.. MORGAN what happened
Mac Scorpio He was murdered guys looks like a gunshot wound to the head and the heart and we just got back from the park Where another murder had happened which was a cop on the staff
Carly Jacks tell him
Mac Scorpio be quiet anyway sonny your wife is on vacation she will be back soon
Sonny Corinthos MORGANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN NN I will kill the son of the bitch WHO KILLED MY SON
'Back in Heaven Claudia is rocking her baby to sleep when Morgan arrives'
Claudia Zacchara MORGAN YIKES your dead?
Morgan Corinthos yep a gunshot wound to the head by someone I don’t know who will i get to go back?
Claudia Zacchara Nope sorry honey when you die you cant go back its just impossible you will go back someday but as a different person so Morgan Corinthos is now gone and forever gone but the lucky thing is Heaven is a lot like earth there’s carnivals and candy and TV and video games and you can do whatever you want and never worry about Getting sick it sounds fun right?
Morgan Corinthos Ah ok can we send a message to my mom and dad?
Claudia Zacchara Sure why not lets go
''Back on Earth Carly and Sonny are crying over Morgan when claudia magically appears''
Carly Jacks YIKES CLAUDIA sonny it’s a ghost
Sonny Corinthos Claudia I thought you were on vacation
Claudia Zacchara Nope sonny I was murdered I don’t know how but I was Morgan and me came to say goodbye and to say were Ok of course it sucks were dead but don’t worry about us were fine heaven is a lot like earth so you will enjoy it And I met up with someone in heaven
Amilea Corinthos sonny my baby
Sonny Corinthos Mom?
Amilea Corinthos My baby has grown up so much and don’t worry me and Claudia will take care of Morgan well I miss you sonny And take care of Michael for me k
Sonny Corinthos ok mom
Morgan Corinthos Bye dad
'There then and then Sonny impulsively kisses carly and they head to the master bedroom where they impulsively have grief sex'
Sonny Corinthos did we just have sex
Carly Jacks yeah we did
'Back at General Hospital Kate arrives in the ER After Johnny Shot her in the liver the doctors give him the News'
Johnny Zacchara How is she matt?
Doctor Matt Hunter she has a inoperable liver and she will die soon
END PART 2
Coming In Part 3
Will Kate Pull Through?
Is Carson Back?
How Will Port Charles React To The Murders Of Morgan And Claudia?
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